05
Nov
2021
Nov
2021
100 Word Challenge
categories: 100wc
People are afraid of too much pollution in oceans and they can do something about it. Two youtubers named Jimmy Donaldson and Mark Rober started an industry called “Team Seas”. “Team Seas” is a project where people can donate money and each dollar they donate is one pound of trash they can get rid of. The ultimate goal is to get rid of 30,000,000 pounds of trash. People need to take action urgently or people could be forced to evacuate beaches. Hurry, the oceans are turning red but they need to be blue.
Cath (Team100, Melbourne, Australia)
November 8, 2021 at 9:22 am (2 years ago)You have created an urgency in your writing. You have been persuasive by providing a way that people can immediately assist. Strong words like: trash, ultimate, action, urgently, forced all combine to grab the attention of your reader. Well done.
ethonle2027
November 9, 2021 at 3:12 pm (2 years ago)Thank you, I really want people to make a change in the world and I hope this will help.